Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss Both views and give your opinion.
In recent years the trend has been changed towards the advertisement. A section of the society thought that ads are main factor behind of our shopping while other argue that it is normal part of our lives and not create significant impact on shopping. In the course of the essay, I will describe both side of arguments, with my point of view.
On the one hand, adds are not main factor of selling while the requirement is a essential fact. Secondly, the purchasing power also necessary to sell anything buy adds. For example, In a cold region's heater is a thing that people commonly use while if there air condition add are show on TV or other ways then it does able to sell that thing in perticular area. However, individuals buy things according to their capacity, not depend on adds. Only those thing people will buy which is in their range.
On the other hand, advertisement gives information to people to buy things, according to that information people buy things. Most add are shown like a way that attrect people if they use that thigh then they are able get benefit. For instance, an insurance company illustrate to people that if they buy their policy, than his life will much easier. They show a expensive thing which is destroyed by some accident. They replace that that thing free because he had that their policy. Most of people buy that policy to save from that accident.
In conclusion, requirement is a main factor then the adds influence to people to buy their things. I believe that adds are play their role after people requirements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...tor of selling while the requirement is a essential fact. Secondly, the purchasin...
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Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'regions'' or 'region's'?
Suggestion: regions'; region's
...ything buy adds. For example, In a cold regions heater is a thing that people commonly ...
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Line 5, column 360, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...an his life will much easier. They show a expensive thing which is destroyed by s...
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Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
... free because he had that their policy. Most of people buy that policy to save from that accid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70437956204 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50651290806 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536496350365 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6113442558 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5625 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217586132276 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726503085922 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059867724529 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12032537875 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056847690208 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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