Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss Both views and give your opinion.
In recent years, selling trend has been changed toward consumer items. A section of society thought that these days in over lives, ads are lead us to buy things while other thought that it is a normal to people and it does not divert us to pay those things. In the course of the essay, I will discuss both viewpoint and describe my opinion.
Nowadays, in our daily routine we saw vast amount of ads of different which attract us to spend money to those item. people see a same add many times in a day which indirectly instal those thing in memory and people start to think about it. In all the advertisments popular artists and sportsm men present those item they are consuming in their daily life while they are paid for that advertisment. People thougth if he is using this product it means its pefect for me however people even do realy need that product.
On the other side people argue that it is part of life and it does create any kind imapct to buy it, while their are other numerous factor imvolved to buy those things. Buying power of a society and individuals play crucial role to buy it and the need that product also importent. For example, a person needs a heater then he only it according to their budget however it does not matter that who expensive heater he saw in the advertisment. In addition this heater only people buy in cold area.
In conclusion, I believe that advertisments play not essential role to buy things, it gives information however humen need is a main factor to buy things.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 118, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ttract us to spend money to those item. people see a same add many times in a day whic...
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Line 2, column 184, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this thing' or 'those things'?
Suggestion: this thing; those things
... times in a day which indirectly instal those thing in memory and people start to think abo...
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Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...create any kind imapct to buy it, while their are other numerous factor imvolved to b...
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Line 3, column 445, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...e heater he saw in the advertisment. In addition this heater only people buy in cold are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49275362319 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36416305714 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554347826087 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7834415583 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228151022397 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798044476912 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500253198829 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135031390178 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263142371094 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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