Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Always there was an argument that advertisements can effect on our
mind and take us to think otherwise which lead to buy different things.
Some believe that nowadays advertises extremely expand and people don’t care
about them like before. In my opinion, advertising is very important method
to make people buy goods and company's products.
According to some, one of the best ways which extremely successful is advertising.
The positive side is people by seeing ads don't waste their times and their money
and help them to providing meet needs. For example, instead of people go to shop
and looking for their goods with a good ad that can deliver a clear message about
product can prevent wasting their time. but the minus side is it can change
your mind. if you don't need a thing when see an advertisement would like to
buy those goods.
Some others believe, ads cannot effect on our decision because they are very
common since people don't any pay attention to them. persons daily across with numerous
advertises and don't care about them. The most important point is ads can sufficient
effect even there are so common. The unknown sector of brain analysis all of them
and you would be able to think about them. Although most of advertising are junk
and their goals is just sell their products people can be effected when across with
them.
Finally, it is not true to say by increasing ads people don't care about them
when faced with them. I think advertise has a powerful dark side that most of
people don't know about it. It is affect on your unknown brain that can control
your decision.
In conclusion, companies use advertising to sell their goods. Because this they make
ads to deliver an especial message to people and make a feel inside them that
should provide that product.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
Always there was an argument that advertisemen...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt that advertisements can effect on our mind and take us to think otherwise whic...
^^^
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s extremely expand and people don’t care about them like before. In my opinion, a...
^^^
Line 4, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on, advertising is very important method to make people buy goods and companys pr...
^^^
Line 8, column 43, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e positive side is people by seeing ads dont waste their times and their money and ...
^^^^
Line 11, column 41, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...product can prevent wasting their time. but the minus side is it can change your m...
^^^
Line 12, column 12, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...minus side is it can change your mind. if you dont need a thing when see an adver...
^^
Line 12, column 12, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...minus side is it can change your mind. if you dont need a thing when see an adver...
^^
Line 12, column 19, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ide is it can change your mind. if you dont need a thing when see an advertisement ...
^^^^
Line 12, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... when see an advertisement would like to buy those goods. Some others believe,...
^^^
Line 15, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ct on our decision because they are very common since people dont any pay attenti...
^^^
Line 16, column 21, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...use they are very common since people dont any pay attention to them. persons dail...
^^^^
Line 16, column 53, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Persons
... people dont any pay attention to them. persons daily across with numerous advertises...
^^^^^^^
Line 16, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...them. persons daily across with numerous advertises and dont care about them. The...
^^^
Line 17, column 16, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...y across with numerous advertises and dont care about them. The most important poi...
^^^^
Line 17, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st important point is ads can sufficient effect even there are so common. The unk...
^^^
Line 19, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m. Although most of advertising are junk and their goals is just sell their produ...
^^^
Line 20, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... people can be effected when across with them. Finally, it is not true to say ...
^^^
Line 23, column 57, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ot true to say by increasing ads people dont care about them when faced with them....
^^^^
Line 23, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...creasing ads people dont care about them when faced with them. I think advertise ...
^^^
Line 24, column 71, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...advertise has a powerful dark side that most of people dont know about it. It is affect on you...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 24, column 78, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se has a powerful dark side that most of people dont know about it. It is affect ...
^^^
Line 25, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...owerful dark side that most of people dont know about it. It is affect on your unk...
^^^^
Line 25, column 34, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...t of people dont know about it. It is affect on your unknown brain that can control y...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 25, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t on your unknown brain that can control your decision. In conclusion, compani...
^^^
Line 29, column 78, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... people and make a feel inside them that should provide that product.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89743589744 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34170097261 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535256410256 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.278338425 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8888888889 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240662888775 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866417159914 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486971276257 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745164376719 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459044170115 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
Always there was an argument that advertisemen...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt that advertisements can effect on our mind and take us to think otherwise whic...
^^^
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s extremely expand and people don’t care about them like before. In my opinion, a...
^^^
Line 4, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on, advertising is very important method to make people buy goods and companys pr...
^^^
Line 8, column 43, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e positive side is people by seeing ads dont waste their times and their money and ...
^^^^
Line 11, column 41, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...product can prevent wasting their time. but the minus side is it can change your m...
^^^
Line 12, column 12, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...minus side is it can change your mind. if you dont need a thing when see an adver...
^^
Line 12, column 12, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...minus side is it can change your mind. if you dont need a thing when see an adver...
^^
Line 12, column 19, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ide is it can change your mind. if you dont need a thing when see an advertisement ...
^^^^
Line 12, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... when see an advertisement would like to buy those goods. Some others believe,...
^^^
Line 15, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ct on our decision because they are very common since people dont any pay attenti...
^^^
Line 16, column 21, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...use they are very common since people dont any pay attention to them. persons dail...
^^^^
Line 16, column 53, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Persons
... people dont any pay attention to them. persons daily across with numerous advertises...
^^^^^^^
Line 16, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...them. persons daily across with numerous advertises and dont care about them. The...
^^^
Line 17, column 16, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...y across with numerous advertises and dont care about them. The most important poi...
^^^^
Line 17, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st important point is ads can sufficient effect even there are so common. The unk...
^^^
Line 19, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m. Although most of advertising are junk and their goals is just sell their produ...
^^^
Line 20, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... people can be effected when across with them. Finally, it is not true to say ...
^^^
Line 23, column 57, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ot true to say by increasing ads people dont care about them when faced with them....
^^^^
Line 23, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...creasing ads people dont care about them when faced with them. I think advertise ...
^^^
Line 24, column 71, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...advertise has a powerful dark side that most of people dont know about it. It is affect on you...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 24, column 78, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se has a powerful dark side that most of people dont know about it. It is affect ...
^^^
Line 25, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...owerful dark side that most of people dont know about it. It is affect on your unk...
^^^^
Line 25, column 34, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...t of people dont know about it. It is affect on your unknown brain that can control y...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 25, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t on your unknown brain that can control your decision. In conclusion, compani...
^^^
Line 29, column 78, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... people and make a feel inside them that should provide that product.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89743589744 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34170097261 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535256410256 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.278338425 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8888888889 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240662888775 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866417159914 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486971276257 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745164376719 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459044170115 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.