In the world of evolving technology humans are surrounded by advertisement everywhere. From social media to various atrractive billboards on roads , buildings and many other places. Many individual believes that it encourage people to buy different product while others think that it is so usual that it is no longer noticed by them. This essay will discuss both perspectives and a personal viewpoint will be offered.
Many individuals do not even notice when a pop up message promoting a distinct product appears on the screen of their elecronic device since it happens quite often. Similarly they do not care what is written on a hording walking down the road as there's plenty of them.
However, this is not the case with everyone. Companies promot their brands in attractive way which caught attention of many. Organisations try to reach a large audience by sponsoring an event or charity. Morever many companies hires eminent personalities to promot their brand for money. The modern way of advertising is so efficient that a lot of money is spent on it to make people buy thier stuff. Recently, a website revealed that popular company Amozon spent their 30 percent of the total revenue on advertising.
I believe that advertising do encourage people to buy their products. Companies providing discount and festival sale attract a lot of people, which they get to know through advertisment. Although it can be expensive still the reward is bigger than the investment.
To conclude, Advertising may not attract each individual, but with huge population and increasing demand it persuade lot of people to buy different things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Many individuals
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Suggestion: Similarly,
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... they get to know through advertisment. Although it can be expensive still the reward is...
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Message: Did you mean 'persuades'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, similarly, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16541353383 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87766728679 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5225282497 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.875 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187257190038 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568036857425 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758427661501 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102911964466 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676904604234 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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