Some people say advertising has positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because it will make people dissatisfied with who they are and what they have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Advertising has long been an effective marketing method used by all businesses. Some people claim that advertising helps boost the economy and increase brand awareness for businesses. While others argue that advertising has been creating many negative effects on viewers because of the false information provided. In my opinion, I believe that advertising will bring a huge profit for the economy, however, it can also be harmful if we use it improperly.
On the one hand, advertising is the most affordable and effective marketing method for every business. Currently, there is rarely a business that does not use advertising as an approach to reach customers. One of the most prominent reasons is that advertising is diverse in terms of categories, from small-scale advertisements such as marketing on social media platforms to large-scale advertisements broadcast on national television channels in prime time slots. Businesses can customize advertising to suit their budget, thereby making appropriate plans to bring profits to the business.
On the other hand, some businesses have been using untrue images and false information to illustrate their products, leading to serious consequences for the younger generation. This issue is most evident in the beauty industry, especially in cosmetics and fashion because of its peculiarity to use images from models with perfect bodies and faces. These standards gradually form a measure for the definition of beauty in young people, making them unwittingly follow the norm and in the worst case leading them to fall into a self-disappointment state or even depression.
In conclusion, advertising is an essential part of promoting product sales and generating profits for businesses. Nevertheless, businesses need to be responsible for the information used in advertising to avoid unexpected negatives and protect the advantages of customers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60069444444 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22694629458 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4156384705 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.076923077 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1662706496 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633964128605 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373095610819 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992006611849 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560663567387 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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