Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?
Following the history of mankind, art has become a fundamental part that contributes to the development of culture, language, economy, and every aspect of life. However, there is a controversial argument that the government should use the money for other urgent issues rather than art. I personally disagree with this opinion because of the necessity of art in popular culture and its impact on humans.
First and foremost, art is a significant factor in constructing a nation's cultural identity. Music can be taken as a typical example to analyze the relationship between art and culture. Each country has its own types of national music that can symbolize its culture at a specific period in history. In Vietnam, Imperial Court music stands for the aristocracy from the Tran Dynasty to the Nguyen Dynasty, while “cai luong” - a form of modern folk opera in Vietnam, represents the Vietnamese middle class in the 19th century. These pieces of evidence once again affirm the vital role of art in shaping the cultural identity of a country through the history.
In addition, the impact of art on humans is undeniable. Art shapes our ways of thinking, provides us with a deeper understanding of the concept of self and emotions. Creative art activities such as painting, drawing, photography are considered as relaxing methods that can lower an individual's stress level and make them feel mentally clear and calm. Moreover, art is also used in the treatment process of many psychological diseases such as depression, memory loss, personality disorders, etc. It can be said that the application and influence of art on people is immense.
To sum up, people may argue that science and technology, or global warming, and other social problems are superior to art. Nevertheless, art makes life worthwhile by helping us to gain a better understanding of cultures, history, and tradition; as well as enriching our spiritual life. Therefore, there is no reason to deduct the funding for art from the government as art deserves to be recognized properly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14029850746 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92532122197 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614925373134 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9265729692 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.625 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165742720008 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551984883472 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410043362333 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102482891361 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418121557119 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.