Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasingly the number of sport facilities. Other, however, say that this would have little effect on public health. Discuss both of view and give your own opinions.
A problem of our modern society is the level of communication’s health has been fell dramatically in general, with many conflicts about how to tackle this worrying trend. A possible method is supply more sport equipments to enhance an active lifestyle.
Advocates believe that a negative lifestyle and work’s incredible pressure mean that physical activities did not play an integral part in their work or their leisure time. If some local sports are installed, it could serve for all people in different ages with all level of fittness and interests. For instance, instead of terrible memories in P.E class, it is better to go a swimming pool or a football pitch.
However, there are a lot of good ways to solve this issue. The interest of physical activities is never universal, so all the sport facilities can just attract people who has fit and healthy, not for all ages. There is a cheaper way to encourage people to be healthier and active, for example, installing the sport equipments in the parks like my local government do. This creates an additional benefit, parent and their children can use it together for entertaiment, and then makes a positive behaviour about doing exercise when they were young.
As well as doing exercise, high tax penalties can be applied to high-fat products, to tobacco or to alcohol because consumption these products can cause plenty of health risks. Even improving the public transportation is also helpful as walking to the bus station is always longer than to the private car.
In a nut shell, in my perspective, focusing on sport center is a narrow way to approach and this never lead to an ideal result. People should be encouraged not only physical activities but also a balance lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 346, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: E
...ance, instead of terrible memories in P.E class, it is better to go a swimming po...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95221843003 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80074839027 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631399317406 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1910488599 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.615384615 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130575249344 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043914789073 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259685113512 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673566561912 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176386659435 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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