Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In the contemporary world, many arguments have been made about the ways to improve public health. Nowadays, it is argued by some folks that the most effective method of improving the public health is by escalating the amenities of sports. But, other peeps believe that sports will have a mere impact on public health, so other measures are required in order to improve public health. From my point of view, I strongly believe that several methods are needed along with sports facilities to increase poor health level of the public. This essay will examine both aspects in detail.
On the one hand, it is considered that rising the number of sports facilities can have a significant role in improving the fitness level of people. In this era, most of the people are becoming lazy and they lack physical exercises on a daily basis. For instance, constructing sports and gym center in the local areas can sharply boost the fitness level. Therefore, doing exercise and involving in the sports activities can effectively accelerate the level of public health.
On the other hand, there are several ways to improve the public health. One of the methods is by providing the proper education about health and hygiene to people. Similarly, increasing the habit of eating a balanced diet and avoiding fatty and junk foods sharply increase the fitness level. Moreover, decreasing the pollution caused by different human activities further helps to make people healthy.
Analyzing both views, in my opinion, sports facilities, as well as other measures, are equally important to increase the fitness level.
In conclusion, public health can be improved in many ways by implementing different strategies. The government has a vital role in improving public health. So, I suggest the government to conduct different awareness campaigns related to health, which will definitely help to eradicate the problems associated with public health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2347266881 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6483467584 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520900321543 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0311795661 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7647058824 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39047642683 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137191739576 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860694585264 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21103063326 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927917272896 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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