Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many major cities have started to invest more in public sports facilities over the last few decades. This investment is due to the fact that most people have become aware of the importance of leading a healthy life. However, others see this measure as not very effective, discussing the impact this will have on the overall health’s population, while advocating for more steep measures in order to improve public health. In my opinion, there is an element of truth in both sides of the discussion. Therefore, it is important to analyze both points of view to fully comprehend the topic.
Firstly, many researchers have come to the conclusion that practising sports has a positive impact on health. Not only will you experience improvements on your physical health, but also on your mental health, since hormones such as dopamine and adrenaline are released when practising certain sports. That being said, we should not forget the social factor involved, especially when practising team sports. That is why some local governments are building more sports facilities in parks and beaches, apart from giving incentives to private sports clubs.
However, there are those who claim that this will have little impact on the overall public health, and are demanding for more actions to be taken by local authorities. This group of people say that some of the money invested in facilities such as outdoor gyms in parks, or skating rinks, would be more useful if spent on raising awareness on having healthy diets. For instance, they suggested installing stalls in parks where people do exercise such as walking, cycling or running without need of facilities, giving away fruit and bottles of mineral water to those exercising.
They also suggest investing on advertising against smoking and drug or alcohol abuse. Some professionals have claimed that the negative impact of these activities outweigh the benefits of practising sports altogether.
All in all, there should be a clear balance in order to improve public health. Building new or improving already existing sports facilities is one of the many steps towards having a healthy population. Nonetheless, this should not be considered enough on its own, and therefore more actions should be implemented, so that all factors combined together, can have a real and deep impact on everyone’s well-being.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1987.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22894736842 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74216461194 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571052631579 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5106915765 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.882352941 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3529411765 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327072137251 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926351204569 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680700551595 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16257687369 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746985279729 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.