Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both views and give yout own opinion.
There is a debating issue between some people about how to reach for a better health conditions in society. Some say that we should develop sports, while others argue that we can achieve this task by introducing other solutions instead of improving sports. In my point of view, there are some effective ways of solving the problems related to health which are more important than building up sports.
On the one hand, sports facilities have a big role in our life, especially in case of improving massive health. We can take any person as an example who take parts in sport activities usually tends to be more healthy. Additionally, the contribution of sports is incredibly important for young generations. At this point, we can not ignore the advantages of sports facilities.
On the other hand, there are considerably problems that can not be solved only by developing sports industry. For example, people who live in industrial zones usually suffer from air pollution or there are lack of pharmaceutical products in border areas. In such occasions, we should take some steps on the way of improving public health. There are some issues to pay more attention, for instance, we can invest on medical services or pharmat industry in order to diminish health problems. At this point, improving sports facilities may not be initial measure.
To sum up all above, we can not reject the importance of sports in healthcare system, but there are some cases may appear in front of society that could not be tackled only with the measures related to sports conditions. Therefore, sometimes we have to look by another standpoint, if we want to make effective solutions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tance, we can invest on medical services or pharmat industry in order to diminish...
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Line 4, column 203, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'sport'.
Suggestion: sport
...ckled only with the measures related to sports conditions. Therefore, sometimes we hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97132616487 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7403021818 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569892473118 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0178530566 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0714285714 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235776607567 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854066862191 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526861680226 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145981800182 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507358859153 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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