Some people say that a child can develop on its own , others say that teachers and parents have crucial role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Children can go through various situations in their life that changes them and helps them build character and most often look upto who inspires them. The general public’s opinion is that children develop themselves , while the other half believes parents and teacher play key roles in the development process. The next two paragraphs will discuss both views
The development of children is an imperative element in any community or society , as they constitute the next generation .An advantage of self development in children is that it gives them originality and a sense of urgency for improvement. Self-development , once implemented at young age , only continues to grow the older they get. For example , participation in a particular activity leads to improvement in the field and they strive for victory. This leads them to become hard working and dedicated individuals on their own
On the other hand , Children draw inspiration from their parents and teachers as role models. Parents at home take care of the children’s behaviour and manners and teachers take care of the child’s future path with education and social skills. For example , Parents teach their children proper manners , and importance of treating people with respect and basic life skills that are required for a child to survive on their own . This leads to them being self-sufficient and excel in their life duties.
Therefore , the development of children relies heavily on their own abilities and the guidance from their parents and teachers. In my opinion , parents and teachers play a larger and more crucial role in the development of children as their expertise in certain matter stretch far beyond any child’s capabilities and their guidance leads them to be better versions of themselves
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore, while, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39575971731 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88935718322 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558303886926 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9087676185 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.818181818 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206352189644 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817337691052 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629070997921 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134248645747 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469784015398 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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