Some people say that a country will benefit greatly if its students study abroad. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Today studying abroad seems to be perfectly preferred by many parents as well as students. It is said that a country where there is a huge number of abroad students tends to absorb an immense prospect. As far as I am concerned, I almost disagree with that statement. This is because of many reasons, and I will analyze some primary of which in this essay.
To begin with, it is likely that most people choose to study overseas according to their advantages, which is the first place in their list of purposes. In other words, their main aim is not for their country. As a matter of fact, their country, probably, does not facilitate a sufficient environment for them to boost their talent as possible as they desire. In turn, studying abroad opens a door to access novel expertise that they do not have an opportunity to be equipped in their country. Moreover, although having to confront with a competitive environment in a strange country, they are still able to earn a considerable amount of income as long as they substantially make strong efforts.
Another reason I would like to mention is a knock-on result from the previous reason. When the scale of prospects people receive in another country is higher than that their country provides them, it is probably that people, eventually, gravitate toward opting for a stay at a foreign place. In fact, we have a so-call word in relation to this phenomenon: “ brain drain” which leads to a consequence that a country may suffer from the loss of talents.
In conclusion, despite the benefits that individuals can obtain from studying overseas for their own sake, there is a likelihood that a country has a tendency to face detrimental effects rather than great benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, moreover, so, still, well, as for, in conclusion, in fact, as a matter of fact, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82154882155 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72244657576 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585858585859 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0216158987 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.153846154 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161864692415 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537349153873 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427271556792 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100268036749 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046174968626 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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