Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Annually, in terms of linguistic aspect, we witness the loss of various languages, which may result in a number of serious consequences. In some sense, it is said that the emergence of a decrease in the number of languages enables the world to be convenient, thereby it is not necessary to take this phenomenon into account. As far as I am concerned, I partly concur with that statement due to the fact that the extinction of several languages may lead inevitably detrimental consequences.
Indeed, it cannot be denied some prospects of losing languages whose frequency of their usage is not prevalent around the world. Should the loss of rare language arise, it will eliminate scarce of translation which interferes people from understanding other societies. Moreover, they are such uncommon languages that, apart from experts in their particular research, the ordinary seldom acquire them. As a consequence, the opportunity for parts of inhabitants who speak those rare languages to socialize with the world may descend. In case they demand to communicate with other societies, they have to learn common languages.
On the other hand, as I mentioned before, this phenomenon can be regarded as a component leading to knock-on effects. there is an inextricable bond between the linguistic field and culture as well as history. In other words, loss of language is likely to be equivalent to the disappearance of culture. It takes a long period, even millennia, for a language to establish throughout history. What is more? Probably, language officially represents for unique features of a nation that distinguishes them from the others. Therefore, the preservation of language diversity should be concerned in order to color global culture.
In conclusion, no matter how it may be uncomfortable, we should take action to prevent several languages from extinction due to their diversity contributing to global cultural differences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, apart from, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31699346405 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11958702882 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571895424837 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2643440969 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.6875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224513982852 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730237685874 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401415021117 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130353764652 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346636683708 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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