Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it should be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Today, people believe that there is the only way to end hunger and poverty by growing economy. However, economic development cause impacts on the environment, so there is an opinion that it should be stopped. From my point of view, I think it is essential to explore both views.
To begin with, I admit that the economy is increasing which lead to several benefits and this is the only way to help the poor and hunger. It is undoubtedly that due to an economic upturn, people’s living standard is sharply improving. As a result, hunger and poverty are able to have a chance to live with better condition and gradual end their hardships. For instance, the growth of the economy demands more employees. Therefore, hunger and poverty can earn a living for their lives by applying to jobs. Besides, when people make decent incomes instead of work from hands to mouth, they may join charity activities with the aim of helping the other.
In contrast, there exists a shedload drawback of economic development. In reality, almost every year has faced a lot of disasters such as flood, erosion and so on. Additionally, pollution is gradual become dramatically noticeable. All of these issues above-mentioned may be caused by the way people dig into developing the economy. However, in my opinion, stopping increasing the economy is not an effective solution. People’s lives often need many demands, so if they suddenly do not go on advancing economy, their standard living may be also decreased. Due to human’s intellect, people always have solution in order to enhance their quality of life and environment.
In conclusion, the development of economy plays an important role in ending hunger and poverty. Consequently, although economic growth is damaging the environment, I believe that people in modern life knows how to handle these problems and keep improving their living condition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, however, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, by the way, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12540192926 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88952868827 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578778135048 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1024293442 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5555555556 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2777777778 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72222222222 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252149364063 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732751449399 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532084136854 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172851384024 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688894944164 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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