Some people say that education system is the only critical factor to the development of a country.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Some people say that education system is the only critical factor to the development of a country.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is generally believed that Education plays an only crucial role in a country development. While this view is true to some extent, I would argue that there is a wide range of other factors contributing to the development of a country.
On the one hand, there are grounds for people to believe that education is a key to develop a nation. Advanced education is the main drive of the decline of common society issues including low unemployment and illiterate people rate. This leads to the high job opportunities for almost citizens and reduces the risk of crime in the future. Additionally, investing in a growing education system will make a contribution to generate more highly skillful workforce. The knowledgeable and potential employees working in a variety of other sectors are more likely to boost the development of these sectors, which could be associated with nation growth.
On the other hand, I would contend that a wide range of other factors should be considered to be of great benefits to a nation growth and one of them is health. Compared to the past, good healthcare system today contributes to have healthier residents, resulting in the significantly increasing productivity of the labours. Another crucial factor would be technology as it plays a vital role in the development of a nation in this modern era. For instance, cutting-edge equipments such as tractors and planters is considerably beneficial to agricultural countries for their farming activities, which would be more productive as opposed to old-fashioned methods.
In conclusion, I disagree that only education contributes to a country growth.I believe that the development of a nation would be obtained if people are also able to improve other fields well such as health and technology.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ucation contributes to a country growth.I believe that the development of a natio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14532871972 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09789278249 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539792387543 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9016706111 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.916666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19654010329 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763499388315 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558925246813 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138444464066 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566333619347 0.056905535591 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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