Everyone should stay at school until they are 18. Do you agree or disagree?
It is generally believed that all citizens are encouraged to attend schools until they are mature. I am totally convinced by this view because of several benefits this can bring.
On the one hand, dropping out of school early would result in some adverse consequences. A lack of provision of vocational courses for school-leavers and ability to acquire knowledge as well as skills would be obstacles for employees to find jobs. This leads to the increasing unemployment proportion in the nation, increasing the risk of illegal activities. In terms of national development, a large number of school-leavers would be an economic burden and a barrier to worldwide integration of government policies. Young citizens without soft-skills and academic qualifications struggle to enter in International working environment, for instance multinational corporations.
On the other hand, a variety of benefits can gain from the attendance of schools until adulthood. Knowledge and academic performance in high school would provide a wide range of opportunities for young students. These include graduating with flying colors and pursuing higher education or applying into practice in finding jobs. From the government perspective, more and more educational generations, shapers of a nation's tomorrow, play a crucial role in a wealth of distinct fields such as economy, health and education. This trend also makes a contribution to the decline of unemployment and crime percentage, which could be associated with life security of national inhabitants.
In conclusion, attending schools until being adults should be supported for youngsters. I therefore believe that all the young and governments can reap benefits this trend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 393, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ties. In terms of national development, a large number of school-leavers would be an economic bur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60384615385 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26243411142 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630769230769 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1388644654 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.071428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101493347495 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394837286476 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524989633059 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742356134022 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026746795272 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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