Some people say the fashion industry has a bad effect on people’s lives.
Do you agree?
The fashion industry is currently subject to open-ended debate. It is often claimed that the fashion industry affects the public badly. In my opinion, I support this statement for several reasons.
People are aware of their appearance in front of others; therefore, they pay much attention to how they dress every day. Instant fashion trends not only create a huge change in the fashion industry, but they also have a negative influence on people's opinions about appearance. For example, the fashion industry being intermittent and short-lived influences people to put more effort into their appearance. Therefore, they would throw away their old clothes and spend a lot of money on the trendiest jeans or shoes. Moreover, the fashion industry creates appearance obsession in people; thus, it leads to many problems such as depression or self-deprecation if people dress obsoletely to the newest fashion trend.
Fashion is not only about clothes but also about luxury. In a survey conducted by a fashion magazine, the public is willing to spend tons of money on luxury brands like Chanel and Dior in order to follow the latest fashion trends. However, this results in excessive waste in clothing purchases because clothing from famous brands is high-priced. Buying expensive clothes to be fashionable is unnecessary. Furthermore, spending money on expensive clothes just to be trendy can cause many individuals to suffer from monetary problems such as debts.
In conclusion, the fashion industry has a negative impact on society because it not only makes people become obsessed with their looks, but it also brings about financial issues due to the high prices of clothes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27611940299 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74246370091 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585820895522 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8926441098 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215928296221 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797885168586 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658429395611 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130689550921 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590513823892 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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