Some people say that industrial growth is necessary to solve poverty, but some other people argue that industrial growth is creating an environmental problem and it should be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
People have different views on whether industrial development should be encouraged to eradicate poverty or should be stopped to reduce global environmental related issues. Although a smaller section of the population believed that this phenomenon will create employment and increase the purchasing power of a nation, I consider that further development should be in favour of the environment.
Firstly, the main reason for the majority of people below the poverty line is because of the unemployment rate. It is widely known that if any industry growing, it will contribute to afford opportunities to many jobless people. Secondly, having substantial and salary, residents would not show a reluctance to purchase goods and services in order to fulfil their elementary needs. This will not only greatly increase in the procurement but also increase the overall country’s economy by paying taxes. This extra accrued fund could be then utilised in the development of remaining financial limited individuals.
On the other hand, despite the above arguments, according to me, it is more important to consider the long-term benefits. Any industrial development, including chemical factories, automotive, which are the primary causes of air contamination are deleterious to human health as well as to global environmental issues. If such corporations increase significantly, then it will cause to the whole planet by which everyone would suffer from it. Instead, there should obviously be growth in the industries, but they contribute to the mitigate the environmental issues rather than increasing them.
In conclusion, while developing an industry would play an important role in solving the poverty issue, I believe that those industries should consider plans which could bring benefits in the long run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 526, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... the industries, but they contribute to the mitigate the environmental issues rather than in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as to, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05124063644 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629090909091 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1986969605 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.333333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212731612977 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701590879379 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709044170455 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130566596084 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497103591519 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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