Some people say that industrial growth is necessary to solve poverty, but some other people argue that industrial growth is creating environmental problems and it should be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this epoch, it is considered by many masses that secondary sectors must be growth for solving the poverty. However, other believe that it is not beneficial for poverty and it should be stopped. According to me, industrial growth is necessary because it helps to take employment. I will explain both views with my opinion in following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are some predominant points which favour of secondary sectors. Firstly, factories give job to people. To explicate, If the factories will be built more then it would provide more jobs. Unemployment is decreased by them as well as it makes new products with good quality and suitable price which incline economical condition. For example, one survey was done by Canadian government that was 60% people survived their life from industry during those jobs which had been done by them.As a result, industries are play a vital role in human life and the growth of it should be necessary.
On the other hand, there is one big reason to prevent diplomat in factories that is industries give more preference to Robert rather than human. To instance, Every kind of works are done by machines. It has been replaced to people. It inclined to employment in the nation.
In conclusion, although industrial growth has benefit but there is more disadvantage from them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00900900901 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68592389321 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635135135135 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.36456587 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4285714286 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272800654084 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727036909973 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599946335 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152053362965 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068941272369 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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