Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place.
What is your opinion about this?
In this contemporary era, It is irrefutable that most people like cleanliness at their home and workplace. As mentioned in the statement, this is very important to keep your home and workplace clean and well-organized. I believe cleaning is the most essential thing in our life that we can try to maintain everywhere. I will discuss my opinion in the below paragraphs with an example.
Firstly, everyone needs a neat and clean place around them. As with this we feel comfortable, happy and looks awesome. Moreover, people well-organized things in their home so, they can easy to identify, when they are in rush or need urgently. For example, you running late for your office and searching for your id card. If everything is organized then you will find it very easy otherwise, it will take more time to find. So, a neat and clean environment will keep away the germs from your house.
Secondly, most masses are like to organized their workplace as well. So, they can keep things in a good way. In addition, if someone comes to their desk they feel happy and sit, enjoy things and talk. For instance, Nowadays, most companies are organizing events like who can well decorate their cubical or desk. Even giving prizes as well for the first 3 winners. In that way, most of the employees are decorating their places and clean them to win the contest.
In conclusion, having a tidy place is more beneficial for us to keep away the bad smell and germs. Furthermore, It helps us our environment clean and healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76425855513 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68014719761 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558935361217 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6178421778 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.6111111111 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6111111111 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208942928002 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637411211629 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745691143956 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130497838755 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835825649088 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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