Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place.
What is your opinion about this ?
Should people keep their house and their working desk clean has been a topic of broad interest to the public. In my opinion, it would be better to remain the organisation and sanition of where we spend most of our time with.
It is understandable why some shirk their responsibility of cleaning cleaning their living home and their workplace. The first rationale is that the duty of making up their working environment should fall on janitors, who earn their income from doing the task. Similarly, house owners would pay for temporary workers, who visit and do the house chores for them. An additional point is that the requirement may waste people a large amount of time which should be spent on other priorities including the competion of their job at work. Thus, by investing their majority of time in a more productive manner, ones may climb high on their career ladder.
However, this thinking is partly true because a tidy house and place of work offer various health benefit, motivation for work and even provide people with self-discpiline. Computers in company and private rooms may contain a large quantity of virus and bacteria which may cause detrimental effects due to long exposure of users. Therefore, with improvement of sanitation in these areas, peolpe would restrict themselves from many diseases. Secondly, if ones find their personal space to be always tidy, they are likely to be encouraged which subsequently result in more positive perfomance and lifestyle. Finally, individuals could remain self-sufficience and discipline if repeat their sanitaion routine daily.
In the light of these fact, people shoud spend some time to clean up their accommodations and working environment which benefit many aspects of their well-being
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 61, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: cleaning
... why some shirk their responsibility of cleaning cleaning their living home and their workplace. ...
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Line 2, column 605, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ty of time in a more productive manner, ones may climb high on their career ladder. ...
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Line 4, column 17, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this fact' or 'these facts'?
Suggestion: this fact; these facts
...nitaion routine daily. In the light of these fact, people shoud spend some time to clean ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17605633803 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81293735166 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619718309859 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6244982173 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 113.076923077 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0744338556375 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0295355544636 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346557232183 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0572486865527 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271125795895 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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