It is true that the developments in various sector is the key to success of nation. Some people claim that financial stability and better environmental are the vital part of a countries growth and development , whereas others feel that these developments are not a prime part of growth of a nation. I am going to discuss this topic from both points of view and then conclude them by giving my own opinion.
On the one hand, according to some people, fair economy is an indispensable part of success in a country. This is because, if a nation have an adequate money in their account, the people who live in there will receive a number of benefits. To cite an example,developed countries like America and Australia, where people are getting great opportunities like highly paid job, higher standard of living and also they use these money for further development such as charity work and helping neighbour countries and so on. Furthermore, peaceful and calm environmental also needs rlto be considered as an important part. If the country have clean air to circulation, the number of common ailments like respiratory issues and skin allergies will be decreased significantly. Consequently, people can work really more dynamic, productive or energetic and it results a spectacular out come both individual and the country. Take Singapor as an example of a clean city where many epedemics are relatively less.
On the other hand, apart from there developments, some people think that education is the to be the prime important. This means that literate can save people from poverty and also it can improve the standard of living of an individual. In addition to this, proper food and beverages also another key important necessity to survive. The government have the responsibility of ensuring implemention of these developments to be consider at primary level rather than economic and environmental development because these are to be secondary. If the country take to initiative these fields, it can improve the other development also gradually. An ideal example is that in certain African provinces, people are struggling for daily needs. Thus, this is clear that these developments are the most basic one than economic and environmental enhancement.
In conclusion, developments are inevitable for any region across the globe. Though previous improvemts are important, I believe that the first and foremost preferences should to education and proper daily needs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, if, really, second, so, then, thus, whereas, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2076.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22921914358 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05353196697 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534005037783 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7005766876 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.263157895 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8947368421 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57894736842 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225870538055 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645215753397 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452925378301 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12500986719 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618865429833 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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