Scientific researches had shown over the last century humanity had destructed the environment more than ever before. There's a huge debate to decide what the cause is. A popular belief is that this may happen because of the extinction of natural species, others believe that they are a more crucial issue. Through the essay, we can determine which one is the main factor.
Starting from the 20th century, the scientific and technological revolution has brought a lot of benefits for us humans. Since then our surroundings have taken a toll for the worst. Many problems arise such as factory fumes. Modern inventions use in the production chain produce large quantities of carbon dioxide, which is harmful to the atmosphere. This substance can cause global warming and discard dust to the environment. The glasshouse effect is also a huge impact. Even though this has brought lots of advantages for humanity but it is harmful to the habitat. Naturally, the ultraviolet ray from sunlight shines to the ground whereas with glasshouse effective it reflects and punctures through the ozone layer.
Due to overpopulation and modernization over the last centuries, human beings demand more and more land, lead to the destruction of natural territory. This has resulted in the extinction of many wildlife species. without these breeds, our living space is gradually losing the ability to photosynthesis. which creates oxygen lacking problems. the lack of plants decreases a layer of protection for our land and if there's a flood there's no shield covering the surrounding.
Both elements devote to the reason why our living space is being destructed. environment issues seem to be the bigger impact, not only is it a source of problem for humans it can lead to the decline in natural habitat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...y losing the ability to photosynthesis. which creates oxygen lacking problems. the la...
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...layer of protection for our land and if theres a flood theres no shield covering the s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, whereas, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1198630137 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81659917389 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619863013699 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1150757938 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6842105263 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3684210526 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.89473684211 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103376186069 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0276210222121 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026369382342 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610029832754 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0111153394171 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.