Some people say that in the modern world it is very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle. Others,however, say that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to be.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience
One of the big issues of modern world is having an unhealthy life style not only it would have negative impact on
the person also on the society.
For a lot of people in this day and age an unhealthy way of living is very easy. many people, in particular individual that spend most of their time on the internet or behind a computer can have a unhealthy lifestyle, because they do not exercise or spend most of their time siting behind a desk do not put to much effort to go
shopping for healthy food Therefore, they just order junk food online.
Another reason for becoming unhealthy is that people use their personal car for every journey they want to take. As result, the amount of walking become less, so they get very little exercise. and many people specially children's they do not go out side and play anymore. Instead they prefer to play with their computer or watch movies.
However, the social media has it owns benefits in fact they are so many website and data on how to become healthy and stay healthy. Indeed, if a person really wants to have a healthy lifestyle all of this knowledge could really help he or she on this journey.
In conclusion, in this day and age it is really easy to have unhealthy lifestyle and it could cause so many problem. Such as, medical problem and social problem and in the long run it would lead to needing medical help and treatment. On the other hand, It is not so difficult to have a healthy lifestyle, if really want it, it all depends on the person choices it could easily be achieved by eating healthy food and doing exercise regularly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, really, so, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50859106529 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29723993551 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525773195876 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6462920886 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257993597901 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913839716685 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686965560973 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105373620326 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567325727547 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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