We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages.
Now a days technology is a indispensable part of every human life . It is agreed that the technology have many benefits for every day task life. to illustrate this, the effect of usage of modern technology in our life will be discussed.
Firstly, one of the most beneficial aspect of the modern technology is the internet, using the internet allows people to have a vast amount of data and informations at their fingertips. whatever, question they have they can search for it on the internet, and have their answers. also internet allows many people to interact with each others from all over the world. contacting with people has become extremely easy .
On the other, hand one of the draw backs of internet is that people don’t have to rely on their own memories anymore. and if you take away their smartphone and internet they couldn’t do a very good job of navigating their daily life, or remembering vital information. also people do not put that much effort to go out and make friend and have a physical contact, they prefer to stay at home and use their computer to connect with other people. this kind of behaviour can destroy a person social life and have a negative side effect on their mental health.
In conclusion modern technology is improving every day, humans life quality but relying too much on technology it can have negative side effect on person life and make a person not self sufficient enough.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
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Suggestion: for everyday
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Suggestion: also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78542510121 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6143560397 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558704453441 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2288381918 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0939288341028 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426218883481 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294599588638 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0628028959979 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366711700619 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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