Some people say that money can make life easier and more comfortable. But others say that having a great amount of wealth can bring some problems. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of having a lot of money?
Money is important in our lives. While I believe that there are some problems if someone keeps a huge amount of money, I think that our livings will not more convenient without it. Despite some disadvantages, there are outweighed by the advantages.
On the one hand, there are some drawbacks when having excessive money. Firstly, the more money that you earn, the more tax that you have to pay for the government. For example, some countries have applied the high tax rate on employees who have an annual salary more than $100,000. Secondly, when having an excess of money, people often lose their motivation in their life, especially as people who are living in a wealthy family. As a result, they may not try to obtain the more high level of their carrier as well as serve their society.
On the other hand, I believe that money provides various benefits. First and foremost, it is significant that we have the basic necessary and numerous chances to enhance our life when we have insufficient money. For instance, people afford a better education for their children. As a consequence, they will acquire a better job and benefit their family in future. Furthermore, people will receive a fulfilling life with the adequate amount of money. By purchasing household technology devices, people especially woman has more time not only join the workforce but also contribute their work to the social environment.
In conclusion, having a great amount of wealth supply techniques and improve quality of life. Thus, the advantages of excessive money outweigh disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06538461538 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71531651691 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573076923077 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.029918225 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3125 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4375 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331262603002 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112603856001 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640064643221 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20832566224 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310763195886 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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