Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
<span style="font-size: 17.6px; white-space: normal;">There are a variety of methods that connect residents closer despite of the difference cultures and ages. From my view, do I believe that music plays a fundamental role to carry out such lucrative function due to some elements.</span><br style="font-size: 17.6px; white-space: normal;"><span style="font-size: 17.6px; white-space: normal;">First and for most, in terms of recreation, kind of music is one of the most common ways city dwellers enjoy. Because of the same passion in the world, listeners gradually elucidate their opinions about particular both composers, songs and singers. Besides, the development of cutting-edge technology encourages them to share a great information in the domain of music. Not only listening to diversify types of song, but citizens also introduce which songs they are keen on to their friends that causes to the presence of fan clubs. The most remarkable website is YouTube allowing audiences to either give their comments or show their reputation. Should a singer is extremely famous namely Justin Bieber, Charlie or BTS, the number of discussions will soar dramatically no matter who audiences are and where they come from.</span><br style="font-size: 17.6px; white-space: normal;"><span style="font-size: 17.6px; white-space: normal;">Other reason that I concur with this statement is a range of topics. There are the number of essential subjects which take the responsibility for the motivation of composers namely patriotism, nature and love. It is such a valuable empathy that a participant comprehends while listening even though he is a teenager or adult . Regarding country ideas, Taylor Swift is believed to be one of the most successful singers. Apart from both her beautiful voice and amazing talent, should you type this key word, the list of her productions as well as information will make you impressed. Furthermore, English language is a factor contributing to a wonderful communication among global citizens. It is an intersubstitutable function that not only language barrier is limited but people also comprehend each individual despite of several cultures and ages.</span><br style="font-size: 17.6px; white-space: normal;"><span style="font-size: 17.6px; white-space: normal;">In conclusion, types of music always take accounted for making audiences together whether their ages and diversity cultures besides other ways.</span><br>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1705, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, regarding, so, well, while, apart from, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2161.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 6.10451977401 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.30861990837 2.80592935109 154% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612994350282 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.598036891 49.4020404114 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.230769231 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2307692308 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0804887198901 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0251397585529 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.02669666009 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804887198901 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.4 12.4159519038 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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