Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people in different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
People argue that music is a good way to connect people of different values and ages. I totally agree with this view since people across different continents of the world like music, and music contains any instruments. Also, people can attend same concert to dance together, despite they have different cultures and ages.
People in the world enjoy listening music which contains any genres. This is because the song offers extraordinary modern rhythm with different genres which can make people to represent their emoticon. For example, Despasito was one of popular songs in the world during 2016 until 2017 and part of country genre. Despite the songs' lyric from Spain, a lot of lively bar in America, Japan, and German played this song to give spirit for customers due to the meaning of lyric. People can represent their mood when they enjoy listening music, so this circumstance became popular activity in the globe.
Secondly, people with different cultures and ages can visit similar festival which is held in one country, and they dance together. This is because they have similar interesting to enjoy festival, despite they do not understand to each others languages. For example, juveniles and adults from Asia, Africa, and Europe attended Bruno Mars’s concert in 2011 which was held in the Britain, and they danced together to relish the Bruno Mars’s song, particularly “That’s what I like” song. Also, they like this song because the song was catchy tune and popular modern American song, so they sang the easy lyric. Music can make people with different ages and values to attend concert due to similar interesting, and they can enjoyed together.
In conclusion, music is one of the media which is interested by people in the world, and people with different cultures and ages can visit similar festival to dance together. I extremely agree with this statement, this is because music can introduce people from any habit too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 745, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'enjoy'
Suggestion: enjoy
...ue to similar interesting, and they can enjoyed together. In conclusion, music is on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14018691589 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52193336595 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457943925234 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0900621683 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316829974651 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14510262501 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103730858753 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256749656027 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110365533699 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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