It is undeniable that music plays an integral part in our lives since the appearance of this kind of art has brought us numerous colorful experiences and feelings. From my point of view, I agree with those who argue that one of the powers of music is to encourage the connection among people in different age groups and coming from various countries.
On one hand, music can eliminate the distinction between different nations because of a number of reasons. No matter what language we speak, music does not need interpretation for us to understand since it touches our hearts and resonates in our mind. Despite being enjoyed by people from different parts of the world, music shares the same voice which embodies human emotion, joy, love and sorrow. Furthermore, it is clear that the composing styles of songwriters and the performance of artists are influenced by their national culture, such as types of music they produce and what instruments they use. Therefore, thanks to listening to foreign songs, listeners can understand more about traditions and lifestyles of residents living outside their national border.
On the other hand, music is an art form which is enjoyed by all, and this helps reduce the generation and age gaps among people. We appreciate the melody and depth of music which is why people of all ages can sit together and enjoy the same music. Nowadays, it is not surprising to see adolescents are fond of the nostalgic feel of a song released years ago, and likewise, modern music genres such as hip-hop, rap, and techno are also becoming increasingly popular among older people. For instance, it is common to see a family of different generations gathered together in a karaoke room, singing and dancing to the same song with much joy.
In conclusion, music is an indispensable part of human’s lives and it can also act as a powerful means of uniting people of different cultures and ages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, likewise, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92923076923 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69542676469 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572307692308 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.9653598421 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0833333333 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214811472624 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811834553961 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671081782691 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141156226839 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265422920457 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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