Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is undeniably that music plays an important role in the spiritual life of virtually everyone who belongs to different cultures and ages. While I think that music really brings people together, I also believe the differences between generation is hard to minimize by the impact of music.
On the one hand, music allows people to communicate without a language barrier. What I mean is that people can express their emotions and ideas through the melody of the songs. For example, artists who can sing and play instruments are capable of delivering their happiness or sadness to different audiences without saying a word. Therefore, they can build trust and understanding among people despite their cultures and ages. What’s more, music can be a gate to the conversation which makes different types of people open up to each other. For instance, when I travelled to Korea, I used to get close to a local person for the reason that we had the same taste of music.
On the other hand, I also think that bringing people of different ages together may be out of control of the music. That is to say, generation gaps cause many people to have different tastes in music. For example, youngsters tend to listen to current pop music with fast and strong rhythm, while the elderly would prefer classic music from their generation as they want to enjoy the light rhythm, lyrics. Moreover, the different in lifestyle is also the reason for this. While old people are in favor of insightful and thoughtful lyrics, the young are now listening to rap which may help them to alleviate stress and unwind after a busy day.
In conclusion, although music does bring people of different cultures together, I am of the opinion that music can not erase the generation gaps.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i mean, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82781456954 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53588775826 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556291390728 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2421749074 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.142857143 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324287645209 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12335852484 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710538970054 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215884293803 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296273348039 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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