Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is argued that music can gather people of different cultures and age groups together. I completely agree that music is a way of connecting different cultures and ages.
Music is a very important tool for linking people from different background with different ages for some reasons. Firstly, music feeds souls by translation feelings into overwhelming emotions, which has a role of changing the personality. For example, a lot of studies proved that music can be a way of correcting behaviours and a lot of countries are using it to correct prisoners’ behaviour. Secondly, it can build relations between people from all wakes of life. It doesn’t matter which language they speak, as it is a universal way of communication. Finally, it breaks barriers during conflicts, whether between countries or individuals. For instance, we always noticed in movies when couples have an argument one of them tries to remedy the situation using the romantic music.
In addition, it is a great motivation during wars or revolutions. Most of us heard and even experienced the Arab spring, and we all know what role music played in removing dictatorships and changing regimes. In every revolution at each country, there is a revolution’s singer, who is motivating the people to stand beside each other fighting for their freedom. They used the music and songs as their own strong weapon in front of tanks and firearms. Therefore, they revolutions succeeded. Is it possible to change the corrupt using music? Definitely, it is. The revolutions showed us how this weapon is stronger than any other weapon to fight unjust, corrupt and inequity.
In conclusion, it seems to me that music is a very significant tool, which can effectively change the world we believed in it.
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12413793103 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03161306313 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593103448276 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1060602799 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5555555556 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227362112774 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068251820015 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898825136884 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156389899885 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130011355209 0.056905535591 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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