Some people say music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Many are of the opinion that music is one of the best methods to connect people who come from distinct countries and ages together. I completely agree with this notion, and this essay will clarify my view.
One of the most compelling reasons why I am in favor of this is that people spend their leisure time on listening to the melody, which can bring content feelings to their minds of them. These range from elderly human beings to teenagers and multinational traditions. For example, classical
music attracts many kinds of people over the world and has long-term history, such as opera, pop, and rock. Besides, music always appears when people need to relax after work. It makes them feel relaxable and boosts their energy. This means that music plays an important role in this day and age.
To add further credence to my assertion, music can spread the spirit and share love through its lyric. Every country has many types of cultures; hence there are enormous nations divided into five colonies. Each song contains a meaning of love or education which want to send a message to audiences. As a result, it helps them to gain a deeper insight into national traditions and their indigenous people. Additionally, it does not tend to limit groups of age; therefore, children can learn how to protect biodiversity and preserve the animal in their lives. For example, the world witnesses the numerous songs composed every year by a well-known composer or a passionate amateur. In particular, it will bring people of many countries and ages together.
In conclusion, while many people think that music does not have any meanings, I still believe that it completes its mission to connect people from distinct nations and groups of age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es and ages together. In conclusion, while many people think that music does ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9040247678 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48311110379 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594427244582 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8107548414 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9444444444 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403453723917 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121847585308 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161774689787 0.0667982634062 242% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267278653753 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.295809809103 0.056905535591 520% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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