It is said that music can connect people, despite their backgrounds and ages. I strongly agree with this statement.
One of the reasons music eliminates the barriers among different cultures and nations is that people enjoy music from every part of the world, and music speaks the same language - The language which embodies human beings' emotion, love, joy, and sorrow. Music does not need interpretation to be fully understood or enjoyed as it touches our hearts and resonates in our minds. No matter what language you speak, we all appreciate the melody and the depth of music, which is why people from every generation can gather and enjoy music together. For instance, nowadays, besides traditional songs, many youngsters take pleasure in listening to foreign songs because of the exciting choruses and catchy tunes which of them unwind and relax after a working day.
In addition, music has the power to promote cross-cultural understanding and acceptance. People can gain a deeper appreciation of other cultures and ways of living Thanks to exposure to various music genres and traditions. Moreover, music is an Art form that is enjoyed by all and this helps abridge the generation gaps among people. To illustrate, when the national anthem is played, children, adults, and the elderly, oh experience the same emotion which is patriotism, and their solidarity is stronger than ever. Therefore not only does music help diminish generational boundaries, but it also connects people.
In conclusion, music, as a universally accepted and supreme form of art, enriches our lives and strengthens the connection between us, regardless of our cultures and ages.
- Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones Why is this the case Do you think this is a positive or negative development 89
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- Some think that people are responsible for their happiness Others feel that happiness depends on other factors in their life Discuss both views and give your own opinion 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'reasons'' or 'reason's'?
Suggestion: reasons'; reason's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
...age - The language which embodies human beings emotion, love, joy, and sorrow. Music d...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...their solidarity is stronger than ever. Therefore not only does music help diminish gener...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27067669173 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78954066533 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7259998259 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19890154871 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760355853504 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610131433487 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11372793074 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376064045482 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.