Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is said that for people of distinct cultures and ages are brought to each other, that is an excellent way to use music .I totally agree with this statement.
First of all, people from different countries often find it challenging to understand counterparts. Music has lyrics, tones and also the voices of singers that makes audiences feel comfort. You do not need to study a language to understand a song. Music goes beyond cultures. People may feel closed to others when they listen to music together. You may in various cultures but you will somewhat understand what music wants to send through its lyrics or its rythm.
Second, music is also a bridge that connects generation. The old and the young who are in many ages may also find soulmates through music. Young one can find and listen to old day music to understand what old has been experienced in theirs young day. The young can also find out what their peers in other places are listening to catch up with trend in world. Furthermore, the old can find their calm day when they listen music together with their peers.
In conclusion, music is really a stand out way to connect people from different cultures and ages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, really, second, so, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80288461538 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40268722063 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552884615385 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8810659619 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8461538462 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284694196313 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103716835387 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729761039263 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203505337159 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725554580272 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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