Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Nowadays, country is developing and the requirement is upgrading as well. Therefore, learning a foreign language is purely necessary but some individuals claim that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Personally, learning second language brings many benefits not only this reason.
In the one hand, learning a foreign language is pretty good for people if they tend to travel or work in a foreign country. As far as I know, many parents let children learn a second language early in order to study aboard or work in a different country when graduating. They claim that learning foreign language is convenient in all situations. For instance, English is popular language in over the world thus knowing English helps people contact each other fluently. From then they are no longer distinguished in countries. When they travel to another country, they would not find hard to connect with local people. However, learning foreign languages is not only at these benefits but also extended other benefits
In the other hand, some people believe that learning second language stands a chance of foreign country but I think that it also bring opportunities in domestic about many aspects. Firstly, leaning second language makes people more confident when they contact with foreign people. Nowadays, many foreign people come to Vietnam in order to go sightseeing or study aboard thus there are completely useful if they know second language. They can be comfortable about communication ability since then they extend relationship. Furthermore, learning foreign language creates a chance so as to find a good job. Many companies ready to pay a high salary for people who knows the second language. Even having mature people still learn foreign language because they realize the importance of the different language. For instance, people learning foreign language is paid 100VNĐ per hour but people knowing the only native language is paid 50VNĐ per hour.
In conclusion, it is mentioned to me that there are numerous benefits about learning the second language not only foreign but also domestic
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 290, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to second'
Suggestion: to second
...a foreign country. Personally, learning second language brings many benefits not only ...
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Line 3, column 579, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...rning foreign language creates a chance so as to find a good job. Many companies ready t...
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Line 4, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...guage not only foreign but also domestic
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19484240688 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64432193307 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458452722063 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.968087311 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.722222222 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427376672593 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156190885425 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129834222531 0.0667982634062 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.315592343635 0.151304729494 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939239434892 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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