There is an opinion that the sole purpose of having knowledge of a overseas language is travelling or doing a job in another country. However, i disagree with this viewpoint as there can be other benefits of learning distinct languages as
well.
To begin with, the trend of becoming bilingual or multilingual is increasing in this day and age as it paves way for the individuals to secure their place in the international companies. This is because ,command on foreign language enables
a person to adjust in a strange environment.An individual finds it convenient to grasp hard and soft skills as he is able to communicate in a easy manner and can ask his queries from the employer. For instance, darol pave, an owner of international company, most of the time, give promotion to the employees having knowledge of different language. Moreover, communication with the foreigners is also convenient while travelling with the knowledge of languages.
Although, it is vital to learn new language for working abroad and travelling, nevertheless, it is also essential to explore cultures and traditions of distinct nations. To cite an example, facts behind developments and achievements of the countries like norway and german can be deeply understood by learning norwegian and german language.
To sum up, it can be stated that, in this global world, learning different languages solves enormous purposes which are otherwise arduous to sort out. Hence, it will be wrong to say that it is required only for satisfying physical needs.
- People are less fit and active nowadays than in the past. What are the reasons for this? What measures can be taken to fix this? 84
- Nowadays in many countries young people leave rural areas to study or work in cities. Is it a positive or negative development? Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 67
- Some people think that only staff who worked in a company for a long time should be promoted to a higher position. What's your opinion? 84
- Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. Why this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 73
- In many countries, young people leave rural areas to study or work in cities. What do you think are reasons of these? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...the sole purpose of having knowledge of a overseas language is travelling or doin...
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Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...oing a job in another country. However, i disagree with this viewpoint as there c...
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Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...international companies. This is because ,command on foreign language enables a ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...use ,command on foreign language enables a person to adjust in a strange environm...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: An
...rson to adjust in a strange environment.An individual finds it convenient to grasp...
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Line 4, column 138, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a easy manner" with adverb for "easy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...oft skills as he is able to communicate in a easy manner and can ask his queries from the employ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... skills as he is able to communicate in a easy manner and can ask his queries fro...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of distinct nations. To cite an example, facts behind developments and achievemen...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...chievements of the countries like norway and german can be deeply understood by l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17269076305 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04130900945 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610441767068 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3305763554 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.8 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191589439936 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715754724167 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295214178204 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974747959173 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180176444601 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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