Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or to work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The purpose of learning an additional language frequently generates a heated debate with some claim that the primary reason for this is to travel or work in a foreign country, while others argue that there are more merits to come. In my personal opinion, I completely agree with the latter assertion. This essay will first demonstrate that people study a foreign language because they are in search of better job opportunities overseas, followed by how this could help people enhance their knowledge about different cultures.
There is an argument of justification that the statement to wit; there are more people want to be fluent in an additional language because they could have greater job opportunities overseas. The rationale behind this is that there are many people from developing countries want to find happiness in developed nations, as big countries would provide better working terms and higher salary due to the high living standard there. According to the PEW Center, 55% of Vietnamese agreed that they want to study English to find jobs in countries such as America or Australia.
Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, it is also conceded that the learner should not only learning a new language besides the native tongue for working or traveling purposes but also to broaden his mind about different cultures around the world. This borne by the fact that a language is the best reflection of the culture that goes with it and hence, people could have better understand and accept cultural differences. The Times recently reported that children who know from two languages tend to outperform most of their friends at History.
Subsequently, weighing all the aforementioned, it can be safely stated it is beneficial for people to learn an additional language because it not only helps them to have better job opportunities or to travel in a foreign country but also broaden our knowledge about the beauty of cultures around the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...at there are more merits to come. In my personal opinion, I completely agree with the latter ass...
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Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'should' requires base form of the verb: 'learn'
Suggestion: learn
...nceded that the learner should not only learning a new language besides the native tongu...
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Line 5, column 478, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...e Times recently reported that children who are bilanguage tend to outperform most of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, so, while, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.134375 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72144083793 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546875 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.8652341041 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.3 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238596110121 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870545517373 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819186862767 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151889158888 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593136697592 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.