In the recent years, the world has seen an unprecedented increase in the number of people learning foreign language. Some people claim that the only reason for learning foreign language is for traveling and working in the native countries. Conversely, other believe that these are not the only reason why people learn a foreign language; I also agree with this statement. In this essay, I will discuss both the aspects for learning foreign language.
It is that people who are keen to learn foreign language in order to travel and work in foreign countries. To be clear, the last few years, globalisation lift a huge impact on the economy of the nation and promote the growth of the multinational companies. Therefore, the rise in the number of people working overseas resulting the rise of demand for learning foreign languages. In addition, even for traveling, the basic conversation in the foreign language is needed for ordering food, asking for direction and going market for shopping. The local people also respect us because of our efforts to speak their language.
On the other hand, some people say that traveling and working are not only reason to learn foreign language. Firstly, native language is also needed for studying. Many academic programs make foreign language compulsory. When student learn native language, they can understand and appreciate their culture. For instance, American movies are very popular nowadays, because they are showing us about their traditions, food and history. Secondly, to be able to learn foreign language is a good exercise for the human brain. Some researchers reveal that people who have bilingualism has more knowledge than other people. It also improves memory and build self confidence in their life’s.
To recapitulate, the number of people learning foreign language has increased dramatically. There are several reasons for this, while some of these are related to traveling and working, and others are purely personal or recreational in nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24148606811 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69876358107 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50773993808 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5637701261 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1052631579 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42105263158 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.552448095211 0.244688304435 226% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189357911724 0.084324248473 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160565253598 0.0667982634062 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.37269823628 0.151304729494 246% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107458341369 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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