In today’s scenario, sports play a paramount
role in the development as well as progression of the country. The various sporting events such as football World Cup increases the brotherhood among nations. All these kinds of events provide a common platform to reduce tensions among countries as well as patriotism among individuals. I completely agree with the statement and I will shed a light on my view points in further paragraphs.
There are many good reasons why international events reduces tensions among various countries. Firstly, the various international competitions create the feeling of cooperation, team work. However, it also enhances the interaction between the players of different countries. Secondly, many countries get to know about the culture and traditions of opponent countries. For instance, on the World Cup, two different countries play matches with each other regularly which give two nations to understand about their cultural and traditions deeply. Thirdly, it also promotes tourism industry. However, it will further develops employment opportunities and lead to hike economy of the country by promoting tourism industry.
Moreover, when these types of international events occurs, fans show up their patriotic feeling by wearing clothes of their country, hoisting the flags and by painting their faces. For example, in India, when there is an international cricket match organised, most of the Indian fans paint their faces with the Indian flags and motivate their players to be well in the match. Before starting of the events, national anthem of participating countries is also sung which promotes patriotism among citizens of the country.
To recapitulate, I believe that these kinds of international events prove to be fruitful in lessening the conflict between two nations. It seems that by organisating these competitions, it will reduce lots of tensions among countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56949152542 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00592921686 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542372881356 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8630344135 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.6875 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164527769215 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536400179818 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458708895333 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100872580613 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284506901947 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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