Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign language.
In this modern world, Most people tend to study foreign language that allow some opportunities. I am going to discuss why studying any language is important.
On the one hand, to know language is crucial for people. Because if humans can learn language, many possibilities including business success, rich cultural, journey around the world is offered them. By contrast, good opportunities is disappeared due to they could not study language. According to some statistics, there are two people who know foreign language and who do not know any language . However, people who can use foreign language to work have more high salary and great possibility such as go to foreign appointment, participate big project by using language skill. It means that if you have perfect language,
On the other hand, other possibility that form to learn foreign language is to prevent forgetful. Brain would work activity to study any language which means dynamic brain. For instance, in science research, becoming bilingual can prevent brain disease named Alzheimer in addition to people who learnt other language would be able to expose Alzheimer after 5 years than people without language skill. Even scientists have demonstrated that people with language excellence are higher to address any problems.
In conclusion, I completely believe that learning foreign language is benefit for people. By studying language, you would have more possibility and could prevent some disease.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39130434783 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75660036981 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578260869565 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3992235225 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3846153846 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27707936209 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108942298464 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699445440536 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188829447166 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222616551663 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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