Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Now a days, crossing the borders between countries has become easier. Some people believe that only Reason for learning an external language is for Travelling or doing job in overseas however, others disagree that these shouldn’t be the only reason. This essay agrees that learning a foreign language not only for employing in an organization but also for understanding via gaining knowledge.
Firstly, Doing a job and travelling to other countries has become often. Adults Travel far away from their hometown to overseas, for earning money or academic purpose such as: applying for universities. Secondly, the individuals, who are aiming to get a job in other countries needs to have multi skills like, Fluency in foreign languages. Finally, if any employ or an individual “whom doesn’t have knowledge in external language” can suffer in other countries.
Alternatively, acclimatizing oneself in an external language can help individuals. On the other hand, fluency in an unknown language can leads to gaining knowledge for instance: cross-culture understanding. Secondly, mostly it supports the booklover to gain information such as: Reading books about, other nations Geography. Thirdly, it helps peoples to make friends from other countries by using social platforms. Finally, learning a new language helps the public in various fields apart from getting jobs or work.
In conclusion, although majority of people, learning a new language for the purpose of getting money or academic. In my opinion, learning a new language should also be used for gaining External information about other nations such as: their culture and land scape.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Now a days, crossing the borders between countries...
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Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
Now a days, crossing the borders between countries...
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Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...and, fluency in an unknown language can leads to gaining knowledge for instance: cros...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52549019608 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01222422965 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58431372549 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3355767036 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.642857143 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0714285714 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260780350367 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878191463317 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886006079176 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171417225952 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107097119344 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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