Some people say that in our modern age it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Some people say that in our modern age it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

It is indeed a fact that,writing by hand is the worthwhile skill for children.Presentially,It is ignored by the students therefore,It is considered that,It should be taught to the offsprings because of increasing creativity and skills.However,It is not necessary in this fast growing era argued by others.In my option teaching these traits are helpful for their bright future. There are manifold points to shore up the positive of teaching writing skills.First and foremost,Acquiring such talents in earlier age is the capital way to become creative.To be specific,Children age is the impressionable age they imbibe those what they are taught.with the help of these qualities they become well writer,lyrics and so forth.Therefore,Teaching the value of handwriting is worthwhile for students. Over and above,The best and interesting thing that,they are not attracted by modern gadgets such as computer,laptop and mobile phone for their written projects and assignments which has great impact on their health and eyesight.As a result,The presence of handwritten classes is necessary to get away from electronic devices.Furthermore,It is not only lucrative way for incresing knowledge but also pupils can improve the other skills such as learning and communication. On the second side, there are multifarious points to endorse the negative of teaching writing skills.Initally,Encouragement in excessive way can also effect on their study.For example,If tutor push up them consistently or without the interest of the students.Then it creates monotony in their mind and they get deprived off from their study.What is more,These day modern device helps them to right in a better way as compared to hand written.So,this is not so important. To conclusion,I personally believe that,To learn such talents student can uplift their standard in life.Whereas,It's negative impacts not be neglected.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, such as, as a result, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68439716312 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.06895849305 2.80592935109 145% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602836879433 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.483754161 49.4020404114 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 320.6 106.682146367 301% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.4 20.7667163134 272% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.4 7.06120827912 402% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 42.0 5.01903807615 837% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0899676676334 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478077422515 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037888366127 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899676676334 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.5 13.0946893788 256% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.18 50.2224549098 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 11.3001002004 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.55 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.4 8.58950901804 133% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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