some people thing that the government should establish free libraries in each town other believe that it is the waste of money since people can access the internet at home to obtain information Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
Education is the powerful weapon to change the world.some masses assert that,nation should provide free library facilities.where people can accumulate relevant knowledge.other feel that,spending money on libraries is not good for official.now days it is very easy to access internet.since these devices provide golden opportunity to individual.Here,I would like to account for both sides along with my own perception.
There are manifold points to endorse with my view.First and foremost,The availability of internet is very lucrative for people.To be specific,with the help of devices people can obtain massive knowledge within minute because in this era the service of internet is good in everyplace,Which leads people to acquire the information as well as learning capability.Secondly,social sites offer great deal of knowledge to people.For instance,we can see all video, study method and many more.such facilities can not be expected in libraries.Therefore,To access the internet for masses is helpful to collect information effectively.By contrast,others have conflicting view.
To begin with,The huge revenue spending on libraries is very imperative for all people because libraries is place where lot of people acquire huge knowledge with practical path as compared to modern device because some time,Internet information is not sure.What is more,sitting in better environment is good for people.As the majority of masses get information easily with proper time management which help them doing work with full concentration.
Over and above,Library is a place which supply fair opportunity to people such as modern books,magazines and newspapers and so forth which help people to know about the daily happening in whole world.
To conclude,Both aspects have its own significance the value of libraries can be neglected rather then modern devices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83882783883 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.72537737441 2.80592935109 133% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608058608059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 193.458626068 49.4020404114 392% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 318.8 106.682146367 299% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.6 20.7667163134 263% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.6 7.06120827912 334% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230806498794 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125338641468 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331405442039 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125338641468 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331405442039 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.4 13.0946893788 255% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -8.71 50.2224549098 -17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 11.3001002004 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.48 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.88 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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