Some people say that parents have the most important role ...
Children life is interplay from many factors. Some people think that parents are most essential for child developing. However, others believe that environmental could change their behaviour such as television and his/her friend. I believe that both of them would give effect for them. Parents are people who direct interaction with their son/daughter.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 41.998997996 7% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 354.0 1615.20841683 22% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 63.0 315.596192385 20% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61904761905 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.81731324726 4.20363070211 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60389581925 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 51.0 176.041082164 29% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.809523809524 0.561755894193 144% => OK
syllable_count: 102.6 506.74238477 20% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.5101600839 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.0 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.5 20.7667163134 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336053798343 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154574407227 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154396321743 0.0667982634062 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.336863587273 0.151304729494 223% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129562003447 0.056905535591 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 50.2224549098 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.84 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 78.4519038076 22% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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