Some people say part-time jobs are useful for full-time students because they have not only earn money but also gain career experience. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, more students are doing part-time jobs while being at university because working along beside studies would give them favorable opportunities. some people say that part-time jobs are useful for full-time students because they not only earn money but also gain career experience. I totally agree with this idea, I will give some reasons to approve this.
Firstly, working would help students fill gaps in their knowledge, especially for practical knowledge which they may not acquire completely at their schools. Secondly, taking part-time jobs is a great chance for students to get their jobs in the future. For example, final-year economic students should apply for a part-time job as a trainee in different companies to get experience to learn how to deal with customers or the best way goods selling as more as possible. Thirdly, students could earn money to afford their living and tuition fee.
However, doing part-time jobs could cause some problems. The biggest one that students have to cope with is time management. doing part-time jobs takes a lot of time, so students do not have much time for their studies. As result, they usually receive low grades, even they can fail their exams. In addition, part-time jobs with high salary normally requires a lot of effort, which makes students feel tired after work and of course, they might ignore studying.
In conclusion, I believe that students should do part-time jobs because they could get valuable working experience along with great income for their life, but they should also pay attention to arrange their time reasonably and choose suitable part-time jobs that could complete both working and studying.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25461254613 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47358011857 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571955719557 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7749954562 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.538461538 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.525121858439 0.244688304435 215% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218032156572 0.084324248473 259% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.196973398266 0.0667982634062 295% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.354412908312 0.151304729494 234% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132177886474 0.056905535591 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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