Some people say that a person's success is as a result of the way he has been brought up by his parents.
Do you agree or disagree?
Right upbringing of a person is mostly attributed to proper parenting skills. A section of the society believes in parents upbringing having a major role in the success of a person, whereas, others feel that parent’s role may not play a vital role in the success story of an individual. I partially concur with both the viewpoints. In this essay would further validate my opinion through proper elucidations.
The most compelling reason to prove my stance in favour of the parent’s nurturing styles, as responsible parents can make a sea of difference in the child’s glory. A child whose parents are indulging, but at the same time quick at inculcating discipline, compassion and value for money. Like for example, the mother of Albert Einstein the great scientist and physicist’s mother showed firm belief in his intelligence, even when the teacher pronounced him as dumb, she never once doubted in his genius. This kind of faith in her son’s potential was instrumental in his phenomenal success.
Some people may not be able to give credit their success to their parents upbringing. As truly cited, some people meet success on their own mettle or there may be other factors contributing towards their success. For such people, parents may have even disowned them or simply they got separated from their parents at an early age, for varied reasons like divorce. death, financial constraints etc. for instance, the famous Indian cricketer was raised by a single mother at an early age, because of a bitter divorce between his parents. So regardless of the fact that his childhood phase was really traumatic, he didn’t lose his focus and charted his own way to the top.
To recapitulate, each person has got his own success story to tell, besides, one can be highly different from anther. For some their parents may play a pivotal role in shaping their destiny, whereas in others they may express their gratitude to other contributory factors.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, really, so, whereas, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10461538462 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84619542589 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606153846154 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9990609891 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.6875 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138711876482 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476697426345 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460365643047 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837812438123 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393949434683 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.