Some people feel that global warming should be dealt with by governments. Others feel that it is the responsibility of individuals in society to solve the problem. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Global warming is a moot topic of discussion in today’s era. Over the past few years, there has been a gradual increase in the temperature of the earth’s surface. In order to combat this issue, some people believe that members of society should take some measures whereas, a couple others and I feel that higher authorities should be accountable to handle this grave situation.
On the one hand, proponents of the former view believe that the global warming is the impact of human behaviour, and, therefore, it is their own responsibility to take certain initiatives collectively to solve the issue by choosing to Place limits on the amount of carbon that pollutes the air is allowed to emit. For instance, Increase vehicle fuel efficiency and also further support other solutions like electric cars and hybrid vehicles which cut down the carbon di oxide emissions to the level of zero percent. Of late such cars are becoming highly popular among environment friendly people across Japan and even Germany. Such practices have a prolonged positive effect upon the environment which implies that people should take the responsibility to handle this situation prudently.
On the other hand, many others and I certainly concur that the governments have the power to implement legislation that compels individuals and industries to act cautiously, and adhere to strict environmental protection standards. For instance, Norway just became the first country in the world to ban deforestation, a ground-breaking move that could have a major global impact. By committing to zero deforestation, this means Norwegian lawmakers will not award any government contracts to companies that take part in clear-cutting of trees. As deforestation leads to climate change due to the decreasing number of trees available to capture increasing carbon dioxide levels in the atmosphere. Furthermore, it is the government’s responsibility to stand up to face the battles their people are fighting and by taking necessary actions, governments can make a radical difference to lead a fight against the global warming.
To conclude, although individuals’ little efforts to deal with the climate change can have a long term effect, governments, being leaders, have a major responsibility to take the situation under control by enforcing laws on the people to live a hassle free life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, i feel, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37967914439 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14285222198 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601604278075 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.9748694369 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.769230769 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7692307692 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216054770931 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632227307216 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606994929546 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127619327369 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569914038903 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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