Some people say that physical education classes are an important part of a child’s education. Others believe that it is more important to focus on academics during school time. Discuss both these views, and give your opinion.
There is an opinion that including Physical Education classes in the course for all-staged student is crucial and necessary, but some other think that these time spending on PE should be replaced by learning academic fields. In my point of view, children always need the equal development between physical and mental aspects, so we should raise the time for outdoor subjects as the first opinion.
Physical Education, also known for PE, plays a vital role in the way the young develop their physical ability as they have a chance to practice sports and other activities related to it. Playing sports regularly may bring teenagers a chance to becoming stronger along with a solid body, which could help with attracting other people. And more importantly, practising PE in a schedule ensure a perfect health which can be a consistent basis for daily leisure including studying other academic subjects. For instance, students in the countryside regions who have more chance to practise PE showing remarkable progress in creativity and logical thinking, which can not be found in citizens.
Nonetheless, in some countries PE is much less essential than academic subjects due to old bias and sometimes the fact that these subjects are the only thing that could get them a satisfied choice of higher education and a blissful occupation with high salary. Only subjects and certificates related to natural sciences is focused on by employers on a résumé.
In conclusion, both physical and mental growth are extremely vital for students but balancing them is also an indispensable aspect for both children, parents and the authorities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... children, parents and the authorities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, nonetheless, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25095057034 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76399965315 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608365019011 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.4342628859 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.444444444 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2222222222 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189711652197 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764392715331 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645520327 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114446178793 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631024108431 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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