Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Other believe that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Issues related to the environment are something that is always discussed in today modern’s world. One part of the society said that the government should be the one responsible for dealing with the polluted environment, while others believe that individuals should change their habits and lifestyle to improve the ecological situation. From my perspective, I firmly believe that it is clearly more beneficial if both politicians and individuals share the responsibility.
On the one hand, there are several good reasons why people tend to think that the government plays an essential role in protecting the nation from pollution. Firstly, the politician is the highest organ in the country, so they should introduce the legislation in order to mitigate the environmental problems. For instance, in order to limit global warming, the construction of industrial facilities and factories can not commence without the approval of the country’s authorities. Moreover, we should know that protecting the environment is not only about protecting the air from pollution, but also about conserving water resources, natural resources, wildlife and more. Therefore, another prominent role the government could play would be creating TV programs to educate citizens, encourage and persuade them to care the nature more. Being informed of the consequences of their activities, individuals can endeavor to alter their daily lifestyle to avoid harming the environment.
On the other hand, managing environment issues can not be successful until and unless the individuals take an interest in it. In other words, being a citizen of society, everyone has equal responsibility for protecting the living environment around us. For example, we just need to change a simple lifestyle such as introducing the separation of household rubbish can make recycling projects more efficient and convenient. Another reason worth mentioning is people can actively limit the use of personal transportation, instead going by public transport such as buses, so we can contribute to reducing the smoke and dust released into the air everyday.
In conclusion, it will be better if the government and the citizens play their part simultaneously, without blaming each other. A contribution of human such as modifying our lifestyle and living habits are as necessary as the intervention from the politician in order to fix existing issues and save the environment.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 644, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...he smoke and dust released into the air everyday. In conclusion, it will be better if...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2067.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52673796791 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12975081411 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566844919786 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.259808552 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.8 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255249583811 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814543518421 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698096120813 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154623590947 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764921780981 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 644, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...he smoke and dust released into the air everyday. In conclusion, it will be better if...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2067.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52673796791 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12975081411 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566844919786 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.259808552 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.8 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255249583811 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814543518421 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698096120813 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154623590947 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764921780981 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.