Without any doubt, society is divided into two groups as per the distinct mindset of different people. Therefore, this has become a debatable issue whether having a permanent job is better than being self-employed. This essay will not only shed light on both perceptions but also my point of view will be elaborated in conclusion.
To commence with the first notion there are myriad things to be shared in this favor. First of all, there is no need to worry about those who are getting monthly payments. This is because people can roll their money whenever they money without any hesitation and accordingly they can invest money. The second point is, there is less stress for those who have a job since it is easier to get a bank loan so on. To exemplify, some organizations to amend a certain amount of money asked for proof like salary certificates. As a consequence, a stable job is always comfortable in so many ways.
Moving towards the second argument of this debate the first point of this issue is that employed people who are doing business need to invest more money on the first time which is a burden for individuals, For instance, it is very difficult for a person to afford so much of money since there is no job. Apart from this, self employees also have the benefit of some extent of time choosing the working hours and holidays and right to change in their businesses. As a result, if the business runs in not good, owners income will be low, and a chance to get feel stress and on the other side when the business does well all the benefits goes to the owner itself.
In conclusion, I retrieve that a salaried job is always is beneficial than doing an own business since there are some drawbacks itself.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecome a debatable issue whether having a permanent job is better than being self-...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57928802589 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49798779527 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569579288026 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9773800787 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.846153846 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0965917889133 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364963522353 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431057350674 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725694225416 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315220749669 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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